TOM #3

  In 1271 when Marco Polo left Venice at the start of his journey to the land of the  Kublai Khan, there was another Marco that traveled with the expedition

 

 

        In the book, ‘The Other Marco’, Tom arrives at the port city of Acre on the boat from Venice carrying the Polo expedition.  His only knowledge of the place is that Christian Crusaders ruled the port but the surrounding area, all the way to Jerusalem and beyond was Saracen [Muslim] territory.  Saracen was the term used for Muslim warriors by Europeans on the voyage.  TOM is mostly fearful of these soldiers even without knowing the turbulent history of the Crusader wars that had for hundreds of years been waged in this region.

           A very quick look at the story of the Crusades might be appropriate at this point.

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A Crusader Knight, his armour covered in a white shroud facing a Saracen Warrior

 

          As the Roman Empire began to crumble in the west, Constantine I moved his capitol to the ruined city of Byzantium in the east and established his New Rome.  The city was renamed Constantinople and his empire, Byzantine.  His realm included the Christian Holy lands around Jerusalem.

          300 years later the Arabs defeated the Byzantines at the Battle of Yarmuk, and Jerusalem was captured.  They ruled for 100 years and where then overthrown by Abbasid Caliphate who established an Islamic Empire for 350 years.

          During these 450 years the Catholic Church had grown and replaced the Roman Empire to become a powerful ruling force in Rome and Europe.  Pope Urban II urged Christian leaders in the west to join a crusade to evict the Muslims [Islamic Empire] from Jerusalem.  The 1st Crusade was successful when Godfrey of Bouillion recaptured Jerusalem and assumed the title: ‘Defender of the Holy Sepulchre’.

           100 years later Sultan Saladin defeated the Christians at the Battle of Hattin and occupied Jerusalem.  Richard the Lionheart called for a truce with Saladin who allowed Christians pilgrims safe passage to and from their Holy City.

          The fortunes of Jerusalem swayed backwards and forwards for over 150 years between Christian and Muslim occupation.  Battles determined some of the outcomes, negotiation decided others.  At least two of the Crusader leaders died before reaching their objectives.  In all 8 Crusades were mounted with mixed success.

          TOM arrives in Acre in 1271 when it is still in Christian hands, but 20 years later the Crusades eventually peters out with the fall of Acre in 1291, and it remains a Muslim port till the end of World War II.

An interesting bit of purported history at the time of the Polo expeditions is that the Kublai Khan asked the Polo brothers to return to Cathay with one hundred Catholic Priests and a jar of holy oil from the Church of the Sepulchre in Jerusalem.  They managed to secure the oil but only two Priests started the journey to Cathay, turning back in fear of the war in Armenia on the way.  It is said that the Mongolian leader wanted the priests to convert his followers to Christianity.  They missed the opportunity and just over 50 years later the Mongolians converted to Islam in 1323 with the Treaty of Aleppo.

The mind boggles when one tries to imagine a Catholic presence in most of Asia as there is in South America today for example.

 

The Polo expedition turned south to avoid the hostilities in Armenia and after making a huge detour to Hormuz on what is known as the Gulf of Oman today, they retraced their steps and crossed over the western end of the Himalaya range called the Pamirs.  This was one of the accepted silk road trade routes, but the merchants preferred the northern route through Bukhara and Samarkand as it was obviously warmer.

In ‘The Other Marco’ story, Tom struggles with the cold mountain air and deep snow as he leads his horse through the wet mist.  Adding to this discomfort he has a frightening experience.  The short paragraph below is taken from the book.

‘I was tired, and my eyes burned, trying to see through the white glare around me.  Suddenly the mist swirled and there, right in front of me, barring my way, stood a huge hairy animal with massive curved horns.  Before I could cry out the mist closed in around me and the vision was gone.’

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Imagine being confronted by this creature in the swirling mist!

During the research of the Pamir area for the book, I came across some pictures of the Himalayan Ibex and was astounded by the size of its curved horns.  Perhaps for the very reason that I imagined how terrifying it would be to meet such an apparition in the mist, I allowed Tom to do just that – meet the ‘monster’.  I would like to add a comment here before you think of me as a sadistic tormenter of a young, travel wary boy; I feel every emotion personally as I write.  I would not be able to describe the sensation if I did not experience it myself.  Writing is a wonderful yo-yo of passionate emotions and I even have to wipe away a tear from time to time.  I call it: ‘Living the words!’

Another sketch or two of these magnificent creatures will not be out of place here.  Enjoy.

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Thanks for staying with me to the end of this posting.

 

TOM #4 will be available in a fortnight. #4 being an even number means that the Monsters 4 Monsters corner will be back with a scary picture.

 

 

 

12 thoughts on “TOM #3

    1. Hi Lawrence, sorry to only get back to you now. But pleased to have been able to read TOM#3 as well.
      You are an amazing man, not only are you incredibly creative, you are also so knowledgeable and an amazing artist!! So interesting to read the history of Marco’s journey especially now with what is happening in the Middle East and Aleppo.
      Waiting with anticipation for the next blog!
      I will send this on to my grandson as I think he will enjoy it especially your illustrations – the monster one in particular – I think most boys would love the monster images.
      Can’t wait for your book to be published!
      Best regards Sue Kemp

      1. Hi Sue, Thanks for commenting on my blog. You are too kind and I will really have to up my standard to match your comments.
        You mention Aleppo and I did mention it in earlier writings when I was looking for the obvious route the Polo expedition took. Research can be confusing as many different directions of the Polos journey are found in books and of course Goggle. I eventually did not mention Aleppo as it was too early in the overland journey from Acre to contribute to the text. Had to axe other ‘well known’ places as they added to the complexity without adding to the story. Did have to add places I had never ever heard of though, as they enhanced the adventure. Had to brush up on my Alexander the Great history for instance, at a place called Badhakshan, so that the story could use it to good effect.
        Please do send the blog details to as many people as you like so that they can follow us to the publishers. As indicated, every even numbered post will include the Monsters 4 Monsters corner. Enjoy.
        Lawrence [with wishes to the very ‘best’ porker]

  1. Good evening!
    As one of your proof readers it brings back pleasant memories when I read an excerpt as in the section above. I am a grade 6 teacher and have found your story utterly fascinating! It is soooo part of the grade 6 History syllabus and I cannot wait till it is published. I would like so much for you to include these drawings in your story even if you think they don’t belong. In actual fact, I would include interesting facts like the history of the Crusades as you have done above, as an addendum to the book. Thirty three years of teaching, has taught me quite a lot about how twelve year minds work! Don’t believe for one moment they’ll use their modern technology to Google the interesting bits you are providing above! Everything of the best for this venture! Ronelle

    1. Once again thank you Ronelle for your valuable and positive comments. Whether the book should be illustrated or not is something I am still wrestling with. Novels are not supposed to be illustrated, are they? As with everything one does, there are always more questions than answers, and publishing a book is no exception. That is why I value the comments I am receiving. A cynic would say it adds to the confusion, perhaps, but it also opens ideas I would have overlooked. Regards to S.

  2. Good morning!
    This is what happens when you are not awake!
    Hope it will be plain sailing from here on!
    It would be really cool if you could draw a detailed map of the journey that has a game attached to it!
    Something where they have to read to solve the quest kind of thing.

    1. Hi Ronelle, Brilliant idea. Thanks! It will have to wait till publishing time as this enjoyable blogging route to the publishers is somewhat time consuming. I have been asked by the other proof readers to add a route map in the book. The strange places being visited in the book do need some ‘geography’ for clarity.

    1. Hello ‘Worrisome’,
      Sorry that I have taken a while to thank you for commenting on my blog.
      Sadly, blogs are being ‘hi-jacked’ by some unsavoury fringe elements out there, which makes me wary to respond at all.
      All the best,

      Tom

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